Chapter 1 by Danomaly1983 (Signed) - 19 Apr 2009 - 13:56
An entertaining story about Ianto's encounter with the one of the very first companions - and that companion's deflowering (!). You have a rich and good language. I especially liked the fraze "An ancient gaze set in a young face" - a very good description of Jack.

Author's Response: Thank you!


Chapter 1 by MacBeth (Signed) - 18 Apr 2009 - 17:38
Oh, this was marvelous! Beautifully written and nicely handled. I'm an 'old school' Whovian and I confess I miss fic on the earlier Doctors.

Writing in the present voice can be very challenging to pull off well; it gave this a very nice tone. Well done!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! I've been getting into the Older Who episodes lately (thanks to my Uncle, who taped them, YAY) and I love Ian Chesterton, and since Ianto Jones is my favourite character on Torchwood, well, it had to happen, heh. I've actually got a First Doctor story planned. haven't started it yet, but once I have the summer before me, I plan to!

Glad you like the tense, I felt it fit :D Thanks for the review!



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