Reviews For My Albatross
“Of all the gin joints, in all the towns, in all the world, Carlton walks into O'Brien's.” :wink:
The dialogue is sharp with exellent descriptions/dialogue tags. I found myself drawn in right from the start.
[Shawn groaned and rolled away from the shrill ring that pierced his pleasant dreams.]
[Carlton scoffs, earning himself a glare from the younger man, but he ignores it.]
That minor point aside, this is very, very good, very well written. Nicely done, FF. :-))
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